The Amazing
Journey
By: Melissa Castillo
Chapter: 1
Missing
Something
Once upon a time, there was a modern village.
There were three girls who were all sisters and their
mom had sent them to go get groceries at the marketplace. In town and on their
way there they saw a puppy that was just so sad to look at the poor pup it was
just sniffing the ground and trying to find its evening supper.
“Avery look at that, it’s a puppy can we keep It?’’
said Suzy and jade.
“Let’s just keep it till we can find the owner.”
“Yay.’’ said the girls.
Next they stopped at the marketplace they bought
the veggies and a bone for the puppy. Their next stop was the butcher shop
their mom sent them there to go buy liver, but unfortunately, the butcher shop had
closed.
“Well this is bad luck.’’ said Avery.
“yeah mom loves liver she reminded us a lot of
times that she wanted liver and now she is going to be disappointed.’’ said Jade.
“I know I know, but where in this town are we
going to find another butcher shop.”
“I know, in the Never Free Forest.’’ said Suzy.
“Suzy are you crazy, the Never Free Forest is
filled with mysterious critters and creatures like the snake and scorpions. The
worst thing of all is…the never free goblins.
“*gasp*”
“Plus the trolls they are the worst.’’ said
Avery.
“Well, do you want to go Suzy?” “Yes.”
“So do I.” said Jade.
“Well let’s go for it.” said Avery. They just
don’t know what’s ahead of them.
Chapter 2:
Lost in the Forest
While they were in the forest it was fun but also frightening.
“Is that the wind howling or a wolf?” said Suzy.
“I don’t know let’s just get along with this the
puppy is getting scared.” said Jade.
“Well I think we should all be scared.” said
Avery.
“Why?” said Jade.
“Cause there is a butcher holding a cleaver or those are just the trees making shadows.”
“Um, that is a butcher… RUN!”
“I think we should have brought a flashlight or
something.”
Chapter 3: In the grossest place ever!
“Now you say that!” said Jade. Suddenly, they fell into this dark and very damp room
“Now you say that!” said Jade. Suddenly, they fell into this dark and very damp room
“Is there a light in here?” said Suzy.
“Maybe, I hope I can’t see a thing!” said Avery.
“Aha I found It.” said Suzy.
“Finally there’s light in here.” Said Jade.
Well they were looking around they saw that they
weren’t in the forest anymore.
“Um girls do you think we are in the forest?”
said Jade.
“Nope we are so not in the forest!” said Avery.
“Well how in the world are we going to find our
way out of here?”
“It’s so gross and wet.”
“Do you think this is the home of that guy with
the cleaver?” said Suzy.
“Maybe, but maybe not.”
“This place is just so gross. We need to find a way out of here!”
The girls started to yell HELP! But nothing they
did that for a 1hr and it didn’t work.
“Well that didn’t work at all” said Jade.
“The ground is soft and maybe so is the roof is
to.” said Avery.
“Why don’t we just make a human ladder, and make a hole in the ceiling.” said Suzy.
“Why don’t we just make a human ladder, and make a hole in the ceiling.” said Suzy.
“Maybe it will work.” said Avery to Suzy.
They started doing the human ladder. And guess
what it was a success.
“Finally that took forever.” said Avery.
“Now how are we all going to get out of here?”
Jade said.
“That’s an extremely good question.” said Avery.
“We are all trapped in this scary never free
forest!!!!”
“Calm down It learned this from mom and she
said.
“When lost, find food.”
“Ok but there is no store here.” said Suzy.
“Suzy we have to do something that you really
aren’t going to like.” said Jade.
“What is it?” Suzy Said.
“We have to kill a deer or bunny to eat.”
“What!!”
“Yup we have to, if we want to live, even though
it would be cruel and scary, but we are lost in the never free forest.” said
Avery.
They looked around trying to find sharp objects
to hunt with but all they found was a bow and arrows so it was like they were
on a really strange journey but might get better on the way.
Chapter 4:
The hunt to Live
“Ok let’s get started.” said Jade.
While they were hunt for a deer or bunny or
whatever animal they find they just didn’t know maybe the butcher would come
after Avery jade and Suzy.
“Ok this is gross in a really bad way.” said
Suzy.
“Well now we just have to find matches.” said Jade.
Or we could grab that torch over there.” said Suzy.
Or we could grab that torch over there.” said Suzy.
“Wait whys there a torch over there, oh who
cares, Suzy can you go get it.”
While Suzy went to get the torch when she pulled
it she fell through a gateway of the floor.
“*AHHH!*” She screamed.
“What was that?” said Jade.
“I don’t know.” said Avery.
“And where is Suzy, with that torch it’s getting
cold’’ Avery said.
“Jade go check on her.”
“Ok.” said Jade.
But when jade got there Suzy was gone “*gasp*”
“Avery get over here, Suzy is gone!”
“What!” Avery said while running.
“Let’s grab the torch it’s getting dark.”
“Ok.”
Then suddenly they fell into the gateway the
same way Suzy did.
Chapter 5: At a really
fancy place
Suzy had just gotten out of that gateway.
And was at a really fancy place called la fancy manor.
Suzy had just gotten out of that gateway.
And was at a really fancy place called la fancy manor.
“Wow.” she said with amazement.
“I’m going to see if they will let me in.” she thought
she rang the doorbell. “*ding dong*”
“Hello, young lady come in” said a guy with a
bowtie and suit.
“Thank you, sir.” said Suzy.
“*AHH!*” Jade and Avery were still screaming. 5
minutes later….
“Finally…ok why would there be a gateway in a
forest?” said Jade.
When they both stopped talking and thinking were
Suzy was, but when they saw the giant manor and the gate that said Wickham
manor.
“Wow.” said Avery.
“Let’s see if Suzy is in there.” said Jade.
“I hope so cause if not mom is going to chop our
heads off!!!”
Then they rang the doorbell. “*ding dong*”
“Oh, hello young ladies are you two looking for
someone.” said the butler.
“Yes we think she’s here May we please come in.”
“Yes you may.” said the butler.
“Yes we think she’s here May we please come in.”
“Yes you may.” said the butler.
“Oh thank you.” they both said.
“Wow this place is huge.”
“Let ask that lady over there if she knows where
Suzy is.”
“Um excuse us but do you know where Suzy is?”
they asked the lady in the apron.
“No I don’t, and pardon me but you seem so
familiar?” said the lady in the apron.
“Um we don’t know you, we’ve never seen you
before.” said Jade.
“Well it’s still nice to meet you.” said Avery.
“Well bye.” said the lady in the apron.
“Well let’s just check every room to see if we
can find Suzy.” Said Avery.
Chapter 6: The worst hosts ever!!!
While Avery and jade were crazy trying to find Suzy, Suzy is in the dining hall eating steak and veggies. While Suzy was eating, the butler was cleaning the guest room for Suzy, when he was making the bed he found an empty bottle of poison vial, and quickly ran to the dining room and secretly slipped the empty bottle on to Liliana’s lap (Liliana is the owner of the manor) she leaves with him and goes into the kitchen.
“Pardon me Suzy.” she said.
While Avery and jade were crazy trying to find Suzy, Suzy is in the dining hall eating steak and veggies. While Suzy was eating, the butler was cleaning the guest room for Suzy, when he was making the bed he found an empty bottle of poison vial, and quickly ran to the dining room and secretly slipped the empty bottle on to Liliana’s lap (Liliana is the owner of the manor) she leaves with him and goes into the kitchen.
“Pardon me Suzy.” she said.
“Why would you bring this in here right now? Said Liliana.
“I just
found it in the guest room when I was cleaning It.” said the butler.
“Well I’ll go make dessert.” said the butler.
“Well, get along with it!” Said Liliana.
“Ok will you forgive me if I make your favorite
desserts strawberry shortcake and crème Brule?”
Said Martin the butler. Then Liliana goes back
into the dining hall.
“Suzy how did you like your dinner?” said
Liliana.
“It tastes funny what’s in it?”
Chapter 7: The worst meat ever made
Said Suzy. “Just eat it you look very pail.” said Liliana.
Said Suzy. “Just eat it you look very pail.” said Liliana.
“I feel a little light headed.”
Then she fainted.
10 minutes later…
“My head is killing me.” said Suzy.
She heard a weird noise. “Well I need to go to
the restroom.” she thought to herself, she went to open the door and it was
lock from the inside and out, “oh no I’m trapped what am I going to do?”
She thought and thought then she remembered that
she knows how to open a lock with a sharp object, she searched and searched
then she found a, safety pin. She jiggled the doorknob and kept doing it and it
worked, she tiptoed out of the room and sneaked pass the martin the sleeping
butler. Then she passed Liliana’s room, gladly she was a sleep. She was already
at the front door she opened it and left. “That was really frightening.” She
said.
Chapter 8: Finally out of that manor
then she heard the doorknob opening she hid in a really poky bush.
“Well thank you for the fruits and nuts.” said
Avery and Jade To a lady in a maids apron.
“I recognize those voices.” she whisper-shouted
to herself. Then when the door had closed that’s when she got out of that poky
bush. “Hey, sister’s” said Suzy, “Suzy you’re not dead”
Said Jade. “Of course not why would I be dead.”
Suzy said.
“Well we couldn’t find you anywhere!” Avery
said. “Wait I think they’re coming.”
Suzy said frightened.
“Who, who’s coming. “Said Avery and Jade.
“Hide in that really uncomfortable bush!” said Suzy. Then they hid in the bush.
“Who, who’s coming. “Said Avery and Jade.
“Hide in that really uncomfortable bush!” said Suzy. Then they hid in the bush.
“Hello is
anybody there.” said Martin the butler. “Well I guess it was just my
imagination.” He said. *Fu* they said.
“Let’s just get out of here.”
“I saw something that martin the butler gave
Liliana the owner of this Wickham manor or as called, la fancy manor and he
gave her a bottle with a skull label on it.”
Suzy said making those people sound like freaks.
“Wow that must have been a really bad evening.”
“Yeah, it was the worst night of my life, they almost killed me I’m glad they only used the temporary sleeping potion instead of the poison potion.”
“Well I guess we are going to have to live in the forest.” said Jade.
“Now why would you think that.” said Avery.
“Because we have no other place to go, we have to into we can find our way through the forest in till we find our way home.
“Yeah, it was the worst night of my life, they almost killed me I’m glad they only used the temporary sleeping potion instead of the poison potion.”
“Well I guess we are going to have to live in the forest.” said Jade.
“Now why would you think that.” said Avery.
“Because we have no other place to go, we have to into we can find our way through the forest in till we find our way home.
Chapter 9: Living in a Forest
they were in the forest trying to find a spot to live and also for Suzy were don’t animals live.
“Well this is the spot.” said Avery. “Well this will have to do.” jade murmured.
“I know it not much but we have to live her for a couple of years.” Avery said. Let’s just lie down and rest.
they were in the forest trying to find a spot to live and also for Suzy were don’t animals live.
“Well this is the spot.” said Avery. “Well this will have to do.” jade murmured.
“I know it not much but we have to live her for a couple of years.” Avery said. Let’s just lie down and rest.
Chapter 10: It’s been a week
1 week later…
“Suzy take these twigs and stones and flint and
make a fire.”
Avery said to Suzy.
“And jade go get a pot from that lady that comes and washes her clothes at the stream stat.”
Avery said to Jade.
Avery said to Suzy.
“And jade go get a pot from that lady that comes and washes her clothes at the stream stat.”
Avery said to Jade.
They both had to go
the same direction, and suddenly they heard a bark, it was there
puppy.
“Hey girl, were you lost.” Jade said to rocky (rocky is the puppies name).
“Woof.” barked rocky they ran back to Avery with the pup and gave it to her.
puppy.
“Hey girl, were you lost.” Jade said to rocky (rocky is the puppies name).
“Woof.” barked rocky they ran back to Avery with the pup and gave it to her.
“Here we found our
pup.” said Suzy. “Thanks.” she said.
They went back to
their destinations
30 minutes later…
“Avery we are back I
also found this big stick that we can use.”
Said Suzy.
“Ok take care of rocky while I’m gone.” she said
Said Suzy.
“Ok take care of rocky while I’m gone.” she said
“Where are you going?”
Jade said “to go get our dinner. “Ok.” they both said.
Chapter 11: The 7th
dinner in the forest
Avery started to put
the meat on the stick that Suzy brought it actually was pretty useful.
“Dinners ready!” she said and they came running.
“We are ready.” they said
“Dinners ready!” she said and they came running.
“We are ready.” they said
Mm!
“this is the best dinner yet.” Suzy said. “yup.” they still hoped they would find their way home but, they were just happy they were all together.
“this is the best dinner yet.” Suzy said. “yup.” they still hoped they would find their way home but, they were just happy they were all together.
The end
